Good effort Yarran. That's the first time I've seen an Archerfield drift session. It looks like good fun. I might head out there one day.
As far as tips/criticism goes, I think you'll find a tripod will help with the quality of the footage. It provides smoothness and consistency with your footage. You don't need to buy an expensive one either. Are you shooting with a DSLR or a video camera? If you're using a DSLR then a wider angle lens will help for a track where you can get so close to the action. Shooting at different perspectives is good, well done. I didn't listen to the music so I can't comment on that.
I'm looking forward to seeing your next lot of vids.